"Morning Dew" :-) comments welcome ,, novice poet,,lol... but fun...
Morning dew is in your hair, do you feel the early morning sun?
Silken soft, skin like sunsets din, shining of love has just begun.
With you I lay upon a sheet,, a sheet of hopes and dreams,
gazing in to diamond eyes, an angel of love for which you seem.
I feel you close,, and hold you tight, like blossoms in the morn.
Morning dew, in your hair,, making love till sunsets scorn.....
Poem for the ladies to please,, :) comments welcome?
Very sentimental. I like it. Especially the last 2 lines.
Poem for the ladies to please,, :) comments welcome?
WOW, that is simply beautiful.
Keep up the good work, and I have to show my hubby how poetry is written.
Very deep and meaningful.
blessings.
Thank you for sharing.
Poem for the ladies to please,, :) comments welcome?
It's really sweet. Will make your gf melt.
Poem for the ladies to please,, :) comments welcome?
that was an amazing poem and it seemed like it came straight from your heart. if you dont mind i want to use it as my profile on AIM..my s/n is nirvanablackrose
Poem for the ladies to please,, :) comments welcome?
Wellllll...... If you want a girl to be in bed with you then yes it is a good poem, but if you wan't to flirt with a girl or be nice then maybe it is a little on the edge.
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